Thursday, 3 March 2011

Feedback: teaser trailer;
This is the feedback I got from my media teacher about my film trailer.
  • Split up my tagline, 'every girl' 'dreams' 'of finding' 'Mr Right'
  • Change my title to make it more dynamic
  • Add an extra tagline, i.e 'sometimes love is not a dream'
  • Change the text what is white to black
  • Make the name of the film much more of a focal point
  • Change the review, as it doesn't really help with the narrative

I am going to take it all on board, as I feel if I make these adjustments to my teaser trailer, it will make for a better trailer. It will also make it seem much more of a proffessional romcom trailer.

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